9/21/2011

Blog Assignment 3

 Advice that i think help me is dialogue and sensory because i just have about 1 or 2 in my story so it make my story bored. i learn by reading my friend's work is more  dialogue and sensory, they said more detail and some setting on their story. 

1 comment:

  1. Could you put the language settings for your blog to English, please? I like the advice. What do you think you did well?

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