Blog Assignment 2

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  
How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?




I think i did well is that i give you a lot of idea. I need to improve my grammar and i need to give more detail, topic, words. i think the personal narrative is not interesting because i didn't give enough detail and i was wrong a lot of grammar. my grammar error is past tense, S or ES and i need to correct them in the future