11/08/2011
10/03/2011
Writing Reflection 4
Please look at your earlier test drive and review my comments. What did you do well? How can you improve?
my earlier test drive is about the basketball try out, i did well at i have a 5 W and H, more detail. and I need to improve my dialogue. and some more detail.
my earlier test drive is about the basketball try out, i did well at i have a 5 W and H, more detail. and I need to improve my dialogue. and some more detail.
9/21/2011
Blog Assignment 3
Advice that i think help me is dialogue and sensory because i just have about 1 or 2 in my story so it make my story bored. i learn by reading my friend's work is more dialogue and sensory, they said more detail and some setting on their story.
9/19/2011
Blog Assignment 2
Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week). Tell me what you think you did well.
How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative? Was you personal narrative interesting? Why or why not? What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?
I think i did well is that i give you a lot of idea. I need to improve my grammar and i need to give more detail, topic, words. i think the personal narrative is not interesting because i didn't give enough detail and i was wrong a lot of grammar. my grammar error is past tense, S or ES and i need to correct them in the future
Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week). Tell me what you think you did well.
How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative? Was you personal narrative interesting? Why or why not? What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?
I think i did well is that i give you a lot of idea. I need to improve my grammar and i need to give more detail, topic, words. i think the personal narrative is not interesting because i didn't give enough detail and i was wrong a lot of grammar. my grammar error is past tense, S or ES and i need to correct them in the future
Blog Assignment 1
1 My Autobiography is little bit good, not bad. I think i did well in my speech is my voice, hand. and the thing i need to improve is my standing, move around, speak slowly, and say some joke.
2 The book that make me interesting was Watch Your Brother. Because it about help your mom to watch your brother, when she busy, sick, or she need help.
3 in the summer i read a book name Of Mice And Men, and the author is John Steinbeck. it about 2 men they talking about their life. It is A hard book to read but i enjoy that book so i read it about 1 month.
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