Which story would you like to continue working on? Why?
i like to continue to working on at my cooking story, because that story make me feel better and I helped my mom to cooking when she was sick.
Why is it a good story?
because that story make me know how to cook right now and I love to help my mom at everything.
How can you make it better?(Don't say, "I can improve my grammar" or " I can write more")
i can write more figurative language in my story, more dialogue, and make it funny so people like to continue my story.
This is unacceptable. Please fix your blog so that I can read it or you will receive a 0. I asked you to write a paragraph, not 3 sentences. Also, where is your thesis statement? Make sure you have it for tomorrow
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